Copying Thurstan again - easing my way back into sketching

Hi, how are you doing? Me? Well, I haven’t posted anything here since completing the text and illustrations for ‘Alice’s Adventures at the Poles’, no. That’s partly because I haven’t hardly produced anything since. You know how it is – I have to give my new day job the effort and dedication it deserves, and so a lot of the time I just haven’t had the oomph to sketch in the evenings or weekends. I do make a little money out of my art, enough to provide spendsies for my overseas sketching trips, but it’s not my living so I do have the luxury of being able to leave it for a bit when I’m not feeling it.

So up until the last week, the only sketching I’ve done at all recently was during a weekend in Oslo in January. I’ll write about that in a future post – probably. But by Friday just gone I could feel my sketching mojo coming back. But what to sketch? Ideally it would have been nice to copy one of John Tenniel’s Alice sketches – stick with what you know and what you enjoy, innit? But I’ve copied every sketch he made for Alice in the past and I don’t want to do it again. So what was the next best thing? Well, yes, I could have gone for one of the other great Alice illustrators and done another of theirs. I haven’t coped all of Mervyn Peake’s, or Ralph Steadman’s, of Charles Robinson’s etc. etc. But I wasn’t feeling it. I wanted to do a Tenniel style illustration. Which is what led me back to Edgar Thurstan.

In case you haven’t read my earlier posts on this subject I will try to summarise as best as I can. I fell under the spell of the Alice books through an edition, published by Odhams in the 1930s that my grandfather had bought. In my ignorance I had always felt that it contained some of the original Tenniel illustrations. Towards the end of last year I bought a copy of this exact same edition for pennies on ebay, and found out that the 21 illustrations within it were made by one Edgar Thurstan. But they are so clearly inspired by Tenniel’s work that I think my confusion is forgivable. For what it’s worth I think that Odhams wanted the Tenniel illustrations but didn’t want to pay the commission for them to the Tenniel estate. The rights remained with the estate until the 1960s. So I guess they set our Edgar to his work with the instruction to make them as much like the Tenniel originals without breaking copyright as he could.

I copied the Thurstan illustration of Alice in the train carriage  and compared it with my copy of Tenniel's original to prove my point a couple of months ago.

I also commented that the illustrations where Thurstan shows more originality and goes further away from the Tenniel originals are less effective in my point of view. Well, maybe that’s a little unfair. Here’s the copy I made on Friday of Alice meeting the Red Queen in Looking Glass.  Below it is my copy of the Tenniel illustration of the same scene

You’ll notice the more creamy coloured paper of the Thurstan copy. This is because I used my trusty Royal Talens book for it. Not sure why I feel this way but I always enjoy sketching in it. Now, this is similar to the Tenniel in the style – the extensive hatching and cross hatching. The use of trees in the background gives the composition a little similarity. Thurstan, though, has done what he does elsewhere by transposing the positions of the figures. In this one though his Alice is in a different pose to Tenniel’s, curtseying (it saves time). The figures of the queens are quite different too – Thurstan ignores the angularity of Tenniel’s queen, and the fulness of her face seems to owe more to Tenniel’s Duchess or Queen of Hearts. Both wear crowns which look to be inspired by the top of the Queen piece in a standard Staunton chess set. Compare the next picture I copied, also of the Red Queen, with my copy of Tenniel’s:-

Compositionally there’s more similarity between these two. The position of the hands, and the Queen’s staring eyes come to mind. Ironically Tenniel’s is now fuller faced while Thurstan’s is more angular. Yet I have to say that I really like what Thurstan did with the Queen’s arms and hands. Again, he’s made a figure that is more animated than Tenniel’s original.

Okay, so we come to one of the illustrations that I did think inferior to Tenniel’s by some degree. Here’s my copy of Tenniel’s illustration of Alice meeting the caterpillar in Wonderland above Thurstan’s.

This is an interesting one. Again, Thurstan has done his mirror image trick of reversing the positions of the figures and even some of the background details like the smaller mushrooms. The Thurstan hookah is pretty much the same as Tenniel’s. But the big difference, the huge difference, is the caterpillar. Tenniel, to be fair, doesn’t give us a lot to work with in the original. The caterpillar has its back to us and he doesn’t give us much more than the clever use of what might be the forelegs of the caterpillar to suggest the profile of Mr. Punch. So here Edgar really bites the bullet and ignores Tenniel’s caterpillar completely. His caterpillar is a hairy one. And it’s actually pretty well modelled too . . . apart from that face.

You know, I must have been quite inspired by this illustration when I was tiny because the caterpillar has always been one of my favourite characters. But the face of it . . . well, it’s just wrong I’m sorry. It’s too simple, too sketchy and cartoony. It’s out of place here, and it’s a shame because I have come to really appreciate everything else in this illustration through trying to copy it. But it’s surely a case of inspiration failing Edgar when left to his own devices.

Between making the second and third sketches yesterday I tried again to find out anything I could about Edgar ‘E.B.’ Thurstan, and once again I pretty much drew a blank. The only references I could find were for a few works he illustrated for Odhams in the 1930s and the majority of those references were to Alice. And for that matter most of the references to Alice were specifically to the Humpty Dumpty illustration in Looking Glass. So I don’t know. It’s possible, I suppose, that Edgar was not under instruction from Odhams to make his illustrations like Tenniel’s. Perhaps he was under pressure, inspiration failed him and so he decided to use Tenniel’s work as a starting point. Who knows?

Whatever the case, although I know next to nothing about Edgar, I salute him. For the most part, loving your work, sir.

ALICE'S ADVENTURES AT THE POLES - FIFTY ILLUSTRATIONS COMPLETED

Okay, it is done. Sort of. If you’ve been following the blog then you know that it’s been over a week since I finished writing the first draft of the text of “Alice’s Adventures at the Poles.”. I needed to make two illustrations to the final chapter to take me to my target of forty eight illustrations. I made one on Monday, this rather charming (to my mind) illustration of the mole who is a sweeper in the South Pole Post Office. 

On Tuesday and Wednesday I was writing up reviews of Mastermind and UC for my other blog. By Thursday I had itchy and tired eyes, so I left the other illustrations for yesterday.

Now, this meant I only needed to make one yesterday. Which I did. This mean that I had here illustrations for chapter 12. Still, when I had made the forty eighth that meant the last chapter only had 3 illustrations. As it is, chapters 2,3 and four only have 3 illustrations each, but since then every chapter has had at least four. So I did what will be the illustration at the end of chapter XII. Then I thought – forty nine. Just one away from fifty. So I drew an illustration of the octopuss, a recurring character who makes no fewer than three separate appearances in the story. Here’s the illustrations.

So, am I done with the making, then? Well, no, not quite. The text needs editing and possibly revising slightly. Then there’s the illustrations. I’ve tried to be quite hard on myself as I go along, rejecting and re-doing where necessary. I redrew the second illustration in the book because the original was on cream coloured paper, for example. But there are still a least a couple of illustrations that I think I need to redo. It seems a waste to come this far, and then accept pictures where I think I might do better.

In the coming week, I guess I’ll start to think about my feelings about the whole project, and look to get this down on paper by the end of the month (I’m away on holiday next weekend.)

ALICE'S ADVENTURES AT THE POLES - NARRATIVE FIRST DRAFT COMPLETE!!!

Okay. Let’s recap. I started writing my own Alice adventure in September, around the 11^th. It took me until the beginning of December to write and illustrate 6 chapters. The speed with which I wrote the chapters varied – I can remember taking the best part of three weeks on one of them, but generally they were taking between 10 days and a fortnight. Then we got to December.

The last time I posted, six days ago I had completed Chapter X. I promised myself that I would take it rather easier on Chapter XI and my actual words were “I have no intention of rushing through the chapter at full tilt again,”. Yeah, right. I finished writing Chapter XI on Wednesday, New Year’s Day, and immediately started to write Chapter XII. I produced two illustrations for Chapter XI by Friday evening, and made two more this morning. Then I finished writing Chapter XII. Which means, dearly beloved, that I’ve finished writing the whole of the narrative. Well, the first draft, anyway.

Okay, so I was always going to read and revise the whole story again anyway, but the speed with which I’ve completed the last couple of chapters worries me a little, so I definitely need to go through them.

For the record, then. The current length of the novel is just over 46000 words – which is quite a bit longer than Alice in Wonderland. Which is absolutely not a criticism of Carroll’s book, which is above criticism, just a comparison.

I have completed 45 illustrations, but not yet illustrated chapter XII. My target for the whole novel was 48.John Tenniel made 42 illustrations for Wonderland (and another 50 for as Looking Glass)

My first draft has 19 poems in it. I think that there are 19 poems in Wonderland and Looking Glass combined – 11 in the first book and 8 in the second.

My first draft does also include 180 footnotes which add just over 11,000 words. Self indulgent – probably but writing them gave me a great amount of pleasure.

I don’t think I want to write about what I’ve got out of writing the story and making the illustrations until I’ve illustrated the last chapter, so in the meantime, here’s he illustrations to chapter XII:-

Famous Last Words

I posted on Thursday – Boxing Day – about the ridiculous speed with which I wrote and illustrated chapter IX of Alice’s Adventures at the Poles. My plan was that I would take it more easily after that. Famous last words. I sat down on Friday morning before work, and wrote almost 1000 words of Chapter X. I wrote the rest of the chapter on Saturday, made one illustration for the chapter, then wrote the notes for it and made the three illustrations I needed to complete the chapter yesterday. So in the space of a week I’ve gone from 2/3 of the story completed, to five eighths.

I mentioned the notes for each chapter. I’m not entirely sure whether I’ve mentioned them before. In case I haven’t, when I’ve completed each chapter I like to write a set of bullet notes accompanying it. The notes can cover a variety of subjects. Originally I just wanted to explain the significance behind some of the references in chapter I, and what they mean in terms of Lewis Carroll’s stories and also the real-life Alice Liddell. This soon expanded to the more general historic context to some of the incidents in chapter 1. Then I decided it might be nice to explain some of the choices I made when making the illustrations. Then I though it was only fair to acknowledge where I have been influence by the Alice books in the choices I’ve made for the narrative. . . and so on. While I wouldn’t say that I’ve necessarily enjoyed making the notes more than writing the narrative or making the illustrations, making the notes has become an intrinsic part of the whole act of creation for me. And yes, if you push me, it plays to the natural show off within me that is never that far from the surface – I suppose it is me saying – Look how clever I’ve been! – when I’ve written something that I think deserves it.

Well, I’m two hundred and fifty words into chapter XI which will be the penultimate chapter and I know the broad sweep of what is going to happen in it. I have no intention of rushing through the chapter at full tilt again, but we’ll just see how it goes.

Meanwhile, here’s the illustrations to Chapter X

Three Quarters of Alice's Adventures At The Poles Completed

One of the nice things about writing a story in 12 chapters of roughly the same length is this. When you’ve written 8 chapters, then it’s two thirds done. However you only have to write one more chapter and then you’re three quarters done. Well, as I’m sure you’ll have guessed, I completed Chapter 9.

The text has picked up great momentum. This can happen for a number of reasons when you’re writing, just the same as your writing can lose momentum for different reasons. I don’t want to go into too much detail, because I don’t want to start summarising the plot. But when you’re writing, especially in the picaresque style I’m using for my Alice story, you can find that you’re writing a character whom you really enjoy writing about and then it becomes easy. So the episode with the character in question was only ever planned to go on for about 1000 words, or a quarter of Chapter IX but as written it now takes about 3000, or three quarters of the chapter. I finished writing the text of the chapter on Christmas Eve, and this meant that I wrote the whole thing across three days, Sunday – Tuesday. I also made the first illustration. Yesterday was Christmas Day, which is sacred family time not to be sacrificed on the altar of illustration.

Today, though, the opportunity presented itself, and I have made three – count ‘em – three more illustrations. This makes four for the chapter and 37 for the first 9 chapters, 1 more than the target. So if, for the sake of argument, I manage to produce a further 11 illustrations for the last 3 chapters then I’ll hit my target of forty eight.

It certainly seems doable. However I’m not putting a timescale on it. I’m back in work tomorrow and that could well change things. I’m also aware that it is just as easy to lose momentum as to gain it. It’s a tricky thing, getting the balance right. When the force is with you and the words are zooming out of your typing fingers at 90mph its natural to want to keep it going, but trying to keep going at this rate when you’re not feeling it any longer can be counter productive. On the other hand, while you don’t want to force it there is something to be said for the self discipline necessary to bring yourself to write at least a little every day. Sometimes I’m not feeling it, and even when I’ve written my target of , let’s say, a hundred words for this short session I’m still not. But there are times when this exercise of adding another 100 words to the story has really kick started things and got the creative juices flowing.

Well, anyway, here’s the illustrations for chapter IX

Two Thirds of Alice's Adventures at the Poles Completed

 What a week for my Alice project. Up to now it has been taking anything up to three weeks to make a chapter of the story, text and illustrations. Well, I have written and illustrated chapter 8 in 6 days. Putting this into perspective, I have tried to keep each chapter to between 3500 and 4500 words. Chapter 8 is roughly 3750 words. I am trying to keep to an average of four illustrations for each chapter. I produced 3 completely new illustrations for chapter 8 and adapted one of my own sketches.

One thing I’m very happy about is that this means that 2/3 of the books planned 12 chapters are complete. When I have written the next chapter, then that will become ¾.

I explained in a earlier post how I am often writing before going to work in the morning. Well, working on it a couple of evenings this week when I had the oomph to do it made a big difference.

Well, here’s the illustrations made since my last post:-

Another chapter written and illustrated

It’s been a busy couple of weeks. A fortnight ago I wrote that I’d finished writing chapter 6 and making illustrations for it. On average it has taken about 3 weeks to write and illustrate a whole chapter. Now with chapter 7 the writing came rather easily, and it was completed within a week. However, despite having by my reckoning anything up to five decent opportunities for illustration, I just couldn’t get going with it. My first attempt during the week just wasn’t good enough.

The trickiest thing about this is that I’d started writing Chapter VIII. You see the thing is that in my old job as a teacher I used to get into work about 7 am to have an hour and a half to do things before the children I taught came in. It was absolutely golden time which I’d say was worth about 2 hours at any other time of the day. Well, I don’t go into work in my new job now until 8 am, so that gives me a little bit of time after breakfast but before leaving the house. I don’t write every day, but it’s not that uncommon for me to dash off anything up to five hundred words in a morning. I’ve already written more than a quarter of the chapter.

So, this weekend I girded my metaphorical loins and got down to business. Thus far I’ve only made three illustrations to chapter VII. However, at least this means that I’ve now completed 28 so I’m on target for an average of four per chapter. So without further ado – here’s the pictures – as usual no explanations I’m sorry.

An Arctic Hare and a Baronet

A ewe in a welsh shawl. Would ewe believe it?

Despite the expression he's a very happypotamus